Untitled Longing… Chapter 216

Happy Yom Kippur everyone. If you're fasting; good luck. :) --------- Nick's POV. How can an unknown number be calling me? My hands start to tremble. “Nick, answer the phone, honey,” Mom presses. I press the green button and I swallow. “Hello?” I ask in a shaky voice. “Nick Jonas… Nice to speak to you… Saw your brother and my ex-girlfriend earlier… And oh, lookie here… Guess who's in front of me? Care to say hi, bitch?” a guy's voice laughs menacingly. “It's Alex,” Brooke hisses. My eyes grow wide. “Nick?” I hear someone sob. “Oh, my God. Summer! Are you okay? Sweetie, talk to me. Are you alright?” I cry. “Nick… I need you to listen to me okay?” Summer sobs. Everyone crowds around me and I clutch my phone. “Summer, tell me if you're alright,” I insist. “I'm okay, Nick. I'm—” She gets cut off and I hear a slap. I then hear Summer whimper and I gasp. “Summer!” I yell. “She's fine, Nick,” another voice assures me. I look at Brooke. “That's Drew…” she whispers. I nod. “Drew, what happened to Summer?” I ask, keeping my voice as level as possible. I hear another smack, another cry and my heart rips in two. “Alex… Please, Nick, help her. Please help he—” Drew starts to plead quietly, but then I hear a crunch and a pained cry. That can't be good. Tears pool in my eyes. “Get the fuck away from the phone, Parker,” I hear Alex hiss. “Nick…” Summer's voice again. “I'm here, Summer. What's going on?” I plead desperately. “That was me letting you know Summer is still very much alive ...

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  1. JonasMuizc Says:

    I so agree lets do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. cutierose1234 Says:

    Alex is a fucking creep.
    Who puts a person down on a ransom note?
    But, I was just wondering, what would he do if he actually got her? Obviously he has some kind of attachment to her so would he hurt her? Most probably. Rape her? Likely. I guess he'd be the abusive "boyfriend" type, right?
    Okay I'm rambling again haha
    I really hope Alex keeps his word...not that I trust him one bit but what if the money doesn't cut it for him? Hmm...
    Loved the chapter, again :D
    Love you xxx

  3. jessicannamaria Says:

    Woah. Creepy Alex.
    But I like Nick's change of acts :)
    I suppose thats what you were talking about earlier? :)

  4. brothersjonasluver2 Says:

    Ughhh, alex retard, Nicks gonna be the hero :) Amazing chap :)

  5. SOphieROcksHArder Says:

    LET HIM HELP !

    loved it

    xx

  6. iLynnerd16 Says:

    ohgoodness! I just realized something!!! can't the police track the number? like seriously! those police need to track the number! and then life will be better again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    oh and I know this sounds kinda weird but uhh I kinda want them to stay with alex for a longgg time cause all this drama is just sooo great =D

  7. xxlillianxx19 Says:

    can we kill alex?!?! pleasee!!! Like i said in another comment i want to beat the living daylights out of him then drench him in carosine oil until hes almost ready to drink it and then tie him to a wooden staek surrounded by millions of other litle wooden steaks and then light the bastard on fireee!!!!!!(: <3

  8. iPodluvr287 Says:

    OMG!!!!

  9. kyraredwall Says:

    post next one soon please!

  10. sarahsmoothie123 Says:

    yeah.
    let him help

  11. TheOfficialJBfan Says:

    Alright Nicolas is finally taking action!!!!
    Give Summer and Joy back!!!

  12. xJONASNESSx Says:

    Yay Nick's taking action

  13. zefronbleu101 Says:

    OMG i hate alex so much. like, SO MUCH.
    ughhh
    can you please please kill him at the end of the season? we jonas fans would throw a party.

  14. bratierocker71 Says:

    awesome! your jewish?thats so cool! i didnt know people fast on Yom Kippur? i celebrate and fast then it ended like 2 weeks ago though.

  15. ramansidhu007 Says:

    aawwh joeeey and brookeee <3

  16. JonasLove916 Says:

    I agree with The13Queen, I'm ready for Alex to drop dead. I seriously hate him. I hope they find Summer soon. How long has it been? Two, three days? I can't remember, it seems like so long. Of course Joe loves Brooke! And he needs to tell her soon ; )

  17. misslyss96 Says:

    PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!! :D

  18. The13Queen Says:

    They better find them and when they do they better kill alex. Im ready for him to just drop dead already.

  19. SpaceGirl929 Says:

    Alex is a hoe!!!! i can't believe he hit her and drew on the phone!!!! he needs to die... currently...

  20. samigirl3211 Says:

    Omg we could kill alex by doing what they did a long time ago which is tying each of his arms and legs to a goat and letting them walk away in four different directions!
    perfect for him slow and painful!

  21. poly820 Says:

    OMGOMGOMGOMG
    im dying
    like seriously
    i want to read this whole story
    right now
    lol

  22. madison50364 Says:

    Alex is just becomes a bigger fattie with time! Ugh. Kill that kid! I hope they do anyways. I'm not going to do a creative death though. Plenty others do.
    Nick is such a sweetheart. Love that boy so much. He's amazing. :D
    Sorry. I don't have much to say.
    Um, of course Joe loves Brooke and that must be a heck of a lot of money!
    Um... yeah, that's it. Bye!

  23. alinagow94 Says:

    STUPID FUCKING ALEX!!

    I want him to die, right now.

    Alex better not pull any shit and take Brooke and the money. GOD I HATE HIM!

    Urm.. Joe's heart belongs to someone else :D
    I love you, Slim Jim :)

  24. SKATERgirl0x Says:

    awgh!!
    well what else is he gonna do, though ?
    sit around , cry , and mope ?
    check , check and check .

    awgh! nick is So adorable. i lovee him
    but joseph's mine . lmaoo

  25. MissTrollQueen Says:

    gawd Joe told him he loved brook ages ago. he siad 'Nick bro, i think you and i are on teh same boat' right before Nick told summer he loves her and jsut after kevin and joe find out. anyways thats just me rambling.

    i loved it so much. poor nick

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